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02/05/09
Awww! This sounds like a wonderful sprawling, special sort of day that you'd spend. I loved this memory and it makes me wanted to go ahead and join in with something that carries such a whimsical feel. Loved this! ^_^
You sound like a real adventurer. Thanks for taking us with you.
02/07/09
I love the way this starts, leading into my favorite line, "The sun always shines over Victoria." You showed your joy and your love for Victoria so well. I enjoyed your reminiscences.
02/09/09
Very lovely, and it made me long to be young again!
Aww...what a great little vacation. Your descriptions make Victoria so inviting.
02/10/09
Such a great reminder of this beautiful city with its warm-hearted people. Thanks for the tour.
02/10/09
What lovely descriptions and winsome voice. Just delightful.
Now I wanna go to Canada! Lovely!
Your descriptions in this were marvelous. It made me desire to visit Victoria. Sounds absolutely gorgeous there. :)