The Official Writing Challenge
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01/30/09
Like a slice out of a very intriguing mystery novel. Makes me want to read the early chapters and certainly the latter.
01/30/09
I hope this is part of a larger work. I hung on every word. Vivid descriptions and engaging characters. Wonderful.
01/30/09
I'm totally intrigued and the loneliness and struggle within the heart of the MC has drawn me in. Please keep writing this....
01/31/09
With masterful writing you've created an eerie armosphere and wonderful mystery. I'd read the rest, for sure.
01/31/09
How beautiful is this story--so haunting and reflective. I agre with everyone, please keep writing it.
02/01/09
Title made me curious and you didn't disappoint. An engaging and haunting read. Bravo!
02/03/09
Just one problem I see...
Where's the rest of the story? What happened to him? What do the villagers think she did wrong?
Oh, you know, like the others said, this is like an excerpt from a novel.
02/04/09
OH! is that all? You've got to make this into a whole book, Dee!
02/04/09
Wow, Dee! This is moody and melancholy, just like the cliffs and the sea it describes. What an awesome first chapter! Can't wait to read the rest!
02/05/09
Way to go Dee! A place well deserved.
02/05/09
This is wonderful, Dee! I was swept away. Congratulations!
02/05/09
You created a wonderful mood in this sad story of unexplained loss. Excellent descriptive writing, well-deserving of an E.C.!! :)
02/08/09
Oh wow Dee... I wanted to read more. Love your use of setting and mystery.. So very good. Congrats on your EC!