The Official Writing Challenge
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01/16/09
Very interesting story, and I especially liked the descriptive way you wrote about Biodun at the beginning. It caught my attention right away.

I also appreciated the hopeful note at the end. Biodun was not going to let past losses destroy present opportunities.

Good job!
01/20/09
Beautiful writing, and the second paragraph especially is simply outstanding.
Kept my attention as I tried to guess the what and where you were going. Very unique story.
01/21/09
Extremely engaging, and such a unique take. Love the hope too.
05/28/09
Folokemi, I've long been an admirer of your work here at FaithWriters, and I've chosen to feature this entry on the Front Page showcase for the week of June 29. Look for it on the FaithWriters home page--and congratulations!