The Official Writing Challenge
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01/15/09
Whoa—this is awesome! Those last two lines should create some serious thought.
Powerful poetry! Your word choices are phenomenal.
01/16/09
WOW! This is powerfully, creative writing. A winner perhaps.
01/17/09
I was drawn in by the powerful imagery in this piece--the way you showed how the US can do both good and bad, depending on our choices and where (and at whom) we look.
Awesome imagery reigns in this powerful poem.
01/19/09
Incredible. The couplet at the end, especially, is PERFECT.
01/20/09
Simply OUTSTANDING! I'm in awe of this wonderfully-crafted and meaningful poem, and those last two lines are powerful, powerful, powerful.
01/21/09
Beautiful, beautiful imagery and such powerful words. Wow!