The Official Writing Challenge
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12/13/08
You captured the childish innocence well. I particularly liked the scene transition to the Bible story - clear without being laboured. Mind you, I didn't entirely followed the ending. What was the gift? Or was the note more important? Maybe I've read too many stories today!
12/14/08
Lovely melding of tradition with truth. Your characters are so realistically drawn. Beautiful.
Honestly, I'm not a fan of Santa stories, but this one captivated me. I like that.
12/15/08
Great characterization, and a very cute story. I'm guessing the gift was a candy cane, with the story of the meaning of the shape and the red & white stripes?
12/17/08
Adorable!