The Official Writing Challenge
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I love the message and the imagery you used throughout this poem, expecially in the final stanza. Wonderful job!
12/01/08
Gorgeous imagery in a totally masterful poem. Love it to pieces!
12/01/08
I can so hear this set to music - did you have song lyrics in mind when penning these words? Emotion stirring praise.
There is so much I love about this, but I'll hold it to this one word. . . Beautiful. :)
12/03/08
This is an excellent, moving, touching, and beautiful poem. It is filled with wonderful imagery and imaginative metaphors. Love it.
What a wordsmith you are. This is lovely, and the message is great.
12/03/08
The talent and gift you've been given are jumping off the page in this poem. The line that grabbed me was "Christmas is eternity". A winner for sure.
Wow. So much to take in and reflect upon. Well done.
12/04/08
Very well written ...especially loved the ending!