The Official Writing Challenge
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10/09/08
This is quite good! Nice beat, & I found the lyrics to be original - no recycled common phrases. I had to look up "Shekinah" - it's perfect. I wonder if you have written music to go with your carol? (I was trying to sing in my head.)
10/11/08
I really like the idea of an original Christmas carol! I'd love to hear this sung.

Some of the meter seemed a bit irregular, but I realize that if there's a tune in place already, sixteenth notes and such can smooth out the rhythm.

The lyrics are absolutely beautiful.
10/11/08
This is beautiful! One of my favorites....
Very encouraging. Our God is near! I love it.
10/13/08
Lovely. No need for more words:)
Whether it has a melody or not, this is a beautiful song, with the words themselves a melody. The chorus is a perfect reminder for Christmas and everyday for all time.
Wonderful message and beautifully written, I would love to hear it with music.
10/15/08
Very creative entry! Nice work.
10/15/08
I thought the song was wonderful. Does it have a tune?
10/15/08
Very cool seeing an original carol written. I'd love to hear this sung so that I can get the tune. Great job with this!
10/15/08
This is absolutely beautiful. I, too, would love to hear it sung.
10/15/08
I love your use of the mysterious "shekinah glory." You have so many beautiful truths here. This is "majestic".
10/15/08
Wonderful words. Perfectly on topic :)
10/16/08
No surprise Ms. Morning Song would write an absolutely beautiful original carol for us. Wonderfully beautiful.
10/16/08
Hasd read this earlier when I was running - will comment now! Love the freshness and no cliches - the format is totally wonderful too (how do you do that in this formatting?) Thanks for the blessing!