The Official Writing Challenge
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Chilling, and the title is excellent. "Broad is the way..." but only until its end.
Oh oh oh - wow! I like the intermingling of the past and the present. And between each snippet - scream...step. All building to a fabulous finish. My heart is racing! Excellent.
O man! If I didn't already have a relationship with Christ, you better believe I'd be running to Him after reading this entry.
First of all, your title is absolutely, positively PERFECT. Your descriptions, also, are incredibly vivid, disturbing, and engaging. This has got to be the best I've read so far. Wow.
Wow...this was gripping and intense. The imagery was frightening. Awesome writing!
Your story is awe-inspiring--so very well done. The imagery is outstanding and the message frighteningly true.
Chilling! Congrats on your EC. You're on a roll!
Congratulations on your EC. Powerful entry. Very nice job with the topic.
Hope you don't mind if I share this. It's gripping and powerful! Congratulations on your EC win.