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Very intense and SO suspenseful.

Would have loved a note at the end, maybe, or some background within to give me an idea of where this was happening--the circumstances, etc. But that's probably just me.

Love the ending.
I could feel the tension in this story. Well written and captivating reading. I Would also like to know more about the setting.
This is very well written, very powerful. Great job!