The Official Writing Challenge
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08/01/08
A wonderful retelling of a beautiful story! A little more setting and culture would have helped it a bit.
I liked the part where the father's joy and faith grew as he acted on it.
Thank you for writing this.
I always enjoy Biblical fiction. There was a little telling rather than showing, but still a good story.
08/05/08
Always enjoy stories from the Bible. You've motivated me to reread this one tonight. Thanks for the scripture reference at the end.
08/06/08
This was an excellent retelling of the scripture. You definitely brought the characters to life in a way that was very realistic and believable. At first I couldn't see the topic, but then I saw where you fit it in at the end.

Great, great story.
The Scripture retelling was excellent,especially the anguish of the couple. I rejoiced with them for their son's healing.
08/06/08
I loved the retelling of this story. You did a great job, my friend.