The Official Writing Challenge
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07/31/08
NOOOO !!! You can't leave us there! What happened to Kara?
What a setting..and building of tension, right up to the climax!
Wow...
08/02/08
Oooh!
08/04/08
No fair! What happened? Where's the beginning? Give us the end! (All that to say that this is good—otherwise we wouldn't be asking!)
08/04/08
Finish the story! PLEASE! How cruel to leave me in suspense!...Oh, this is a great story on concentration. I just wish that you could have had a few more words to conclude the story...Very well done...You should be writing suspense novels (not that I read that type much)...Helen
08/05/08
So, you would try and subject us to Chinese water torture! Well, it won't work... we are much too strong... please, please, please tell us what happened next!! Pretty please :(
08/05/08
There's no way this was 750 words--no fair leaving us hanging. Aaaargh! (Excellent suspense BTW. This is creepy.)
08/06/08
Intriguing. You have captured your readers' attention with them asking for more. Without anything to focus on, it is no wonder Kara feels helpless, but then again, the fact she breathed a prayer of thanksgiving shows she can still keep her sanity intact, only because she has God. A well written story awaiting further development and closure.
Well written--suspenseful...and where's the rest? I think it's against the law to leave us hanging!