The Official Writing Challenge
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07/17/08
Words are inadequate here. But I had to use them anyway—well done.
Powerful writing! I'm confident this will be an Editor's Choice, if not a top winner!
Your title leads in well to the emotional impact of your story. I'm glad your MC was freed from the bitterness of her memories.
07/19/08
Masterful. Powerful. Captivating. Well done.
07/19/08
Absolutely captivating in every way. Wow.
07/20/08
Telling title and the text of the story was deep and penetrating. Really enjoyed your writing!
One of the best entries I have read at FW's.
So beautifully written about an unbearable subject. Yet, the promise of the two becoming one and God making all things right lifts one's spirit from your inspired words.
07/24/08
Congratulations.. this was one of my favorite this week.. so glad it placed! Hoping sometime it will be published to ministry to the masses...its one of those that everyone needs to read who had an abusive past.. loved teh ending particularly
07/26/08
Spellbinding. Incredible. What a amazing piece. Congratulations!