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Too bad the the type messed up in places. This is an interesting read. Very creative. Good job!
A compelling, emotionally riveting piece. Moving.
Great ending!
Some of my favorite scriptures here. It's good when hope in the future is restored.
I am glad there was a happy ending for the Preacher, David.
Your imagination is very good with this. I was almost wanting a bit more background about what happened to Preacher and the home, but maybe you didn't want that emphasized. I really like the messages he was getting from God and the effect it had on him. I also didn't quite know the time period we were in until the cell phone rang. I like this story very much.
Your story was so good. I loved every single word of it. Well done!
Oooh, there's a lot packed into this piece! I'm glad there's a happy ending, the interaction between him and God was just wonderful! ^_^