The Official Writing Challenge
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Ooohhh. So sad at the start, but so happy at the end. You have a great voice here, and the atmosphere is simply amazing! I'm so glad that she got her babies back and I loved the names too. Excellent job! ^_^
You did an excellent job of showing the desperation of a mother who's had her baby taken away to the joy of being reunitied with her twins.
An interesting story. I think I needed a bit more information to really grasp what was going on. I assumed it was set in the future, and in an anti-Chrisitian world. One or two typos noticed.
What a joyous ending. I was so happy to see this mother get reunited with her babies.

I see this as being a story that could be expanded upon. The 750 word limit sometimes makes it hard to completely flesh out a story, and I would have liked to know more about this woman and the events leading up to this story.

Thank you for sharing. It was a pleasure to read.