The Official Writing Challenge
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I like the voice you've used in this. It adds to the inexplicable sadness. Well done.
04/19/08
Very nice job. It was unique and most revealing.
Haunting, but very very good!
04/22/08
Oh how very sad! Your clipped words made the story-poem all the more powerful...Well done! So very well done. It is hard to tell a whole story in a short poem, but you did it. You used word pictures to help the reader get the poin....Daddy, never coming back....Helen