The Official Writing Challenge
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04/10/08
A bitter-sweet story that captured my attention. A few minor "fixes" but nice work.
04/11/08
Very good storytelling - you did a particularly good job of characterizing your MC - he seemed his age, yet "older than his years" from experience at the same time.
04/18/08
Congratulations, Folakemi, on placing 36th overall with this piece. Great work!