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03/13/08
If only there were more Traceys in the world. A thought provoking story.
You had me on pins and needles throughout. I'm so glad she did not give him another chance.
You told this sad story extremely well. I'm so glad she has a friend and the fortitude to leave.
03/15/08
I've encountered a few abused wives in these last few years, and you wrote perfect descriptions of her fear. While most women do not have the courage your MC did, I loved the ending. :)
04/07/08
I can't believe I missed this before...it was incredible. I actually protested out loud when I read 'one last chance'.
Phenomenal writing, Joanne.
04/07/08
Wonderfully awesomely sad AND inspiring. Love it.