The Official Writing Challenge
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You described Fools' Gold accurately. "Things" don't bring happiness. I thought it was interesting that even while he was leaving her, he called her by an endearment. She should have made hay!
03/15/08
This was a good piece of writing. I think I stuggle with the message because if she loved her husband as much as you say, then they would have spoken more, his leaving would not be a surprise, and she would have figured out a way to stop him. I enjoyed your descriptions of the house layout and her car.
03/24/08
Oh, what a sad story! Very good on the topic, great writing.