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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 4 – Masters)
Topic: Illustrate the meaning of "Don't Cut off Your Nose to Spite Your Face" (without using the actual phrase or litera (02/14/08)

TITLE: To Finish The Job
By william price
02/19/08


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An American flag was draped over a coffin to the speaker’s right side. His voice was shaking and somber as he read from the pulpit.

Dear Dad,

I know you worry about me in Iraq. And, I know you’re praying for me to come home early; alive. But, I believe it would be better if I came home in a body bag than be sent home because we were pulled out of here.

I think a lot about the ramifications for our country if we’re ordered stateside before the job is done.

I know it sounds strange, but I feel the Lord’s Spirit here. There’s a peace knowing both mine and His destinies are intertwined in this region.

What’s the job? I believe it’s fulfilling His will in this country, whatever that may be. I don’t question; I’m a good soldier.

I could tell by your last letter that you’ve been listening closely to the banter of the liberals during the presidential primaries. They want to bring us home so parents like you don’t have to worry about losing another child in this conflict. And, that is not a bad thing. But to us, each day we’re here is another day we don’t worry as much about another senseless terrorist act in our country. We are a proactive cog in evil’s labyrinth.

Granted, our job here is like trying to keep a broken down shanty, with no windowpanes or doors, swept free of sand in the middle of a desert storm. And, yes, it does get frustrating and we do get angry when we not only have to continually re-sweep the floor, but mop the blood of friends.

We figure, at least my buddies and I, that each life lost here saves a hundred back home.

This place is evil, don’t let anybody fool you, and it will remain evil until the final battle when Jesus returns.

I had a dream the other night. I saw an army riding with Jesus in white garments and many of the faces I saw were those of my friends who were killed here. They were coming back to finish the job.

Even if God decides it’s my time to go, Dad, I want you to know that I’m volunteering to be on one of those horses. This place is my destiny, and one way or the other, I’m going to be a part of getting the job done.

I only write this letter so you know there is more to it than if I come home alive or not. If our government acts rashly and hastily to win points with our liberal countrymen, and pulls us out of here before the job is done, it will do a greater harm to the United States of America and the rest of the world than if we stayed and a young man like myself was killed.

Dad, I love you, but I am going to finish the job.

With much love and respect,
Lt. Joshua Abraham
Your Son


The pastor folded the letter back into its worn envelope. He glanced over at the coffin. Tears streaked down his face as he grabbed a hold of the dais for strength.

“My son wrote me that letter. I hope it brings you the same comfort and strength it has given me.”

Army Sgt. David King’s body laid in the casket next to the pastor. He looked before him at the soldier’s grieving father.

“Your son was a brave man. The United Nations bombing was a tragedy. His heroic efforts saved the lives of hundreds of people from around world. My son always highly respected him, as did I.”

Pastor Abraham grappled for the right words.

“I know most everyone here thought our children would be safer when the new President brought the troops home. Now, we can only look to God as good soldiers and trust His will.”

The pastor closed his eyes and clenched his son’s letter in his hands.

“Looking at it now, my son‘s letter was almost prophetic. I wish he could have made it home from Iraq alive. But, I know he is preparing for that final battle, just like he said he would.”

The Pastor reopened his eyes.

“I don’t have all of the answers, but I too am a good soldier. And I’m confident, Mr. King, that our sons proud faces will be amongst the Host of Heaven riding behind Jesus on that final day of battle, to finish the job.”


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Patty Wysong02/22/08
So sad. Our military personnel are so important and special. A good reminder to pray for them--there is more at stake than just having them return home, but we still want them safe.
Beth LaBuff 02/23/08
It's sad that our military are used as pawns in this political chess game. I really liked your (Rev. 19) thought of the boys on horseback following Jesus when He returns. Your title is good for this.
Joanne Sher 02/23/08
Perfect title for this piece, and extremely compelling. The letter was especially moving - and when I discovered it was being read at ANOTHER soldier's falling, I gasped. Wonderfully done.
Sally Hanan02/24/08
Nice and real, and I liked the Armageddon visual too.
Shirley McClay 02/25/08
Nicely done! I love pieces that support our troops. And I am certain that each life lost saves many more than a hundred back home. There is so much that we never hear about that our men are doing.Thank you for sharing your heart about a controversial subject.
Joy Faire Stewart02/25/08
How long will we be free with a weak president? Very difficult subject and your writing is excellent. I was moved to tears.
LauraLee Shaw02/25/08
Ok, now I am bawling like a baby! Wow, did it take courage to write on this topic and with such conviction. I hung on every word, and in my opinion, the letter from the pastor's son was especially effective. The public does not hear enough from the soldiers and too much from the politicians. A whole-hearted 'Amen' on this powerful piece.
LaNaye Perkins02/25/08
This power and emotion of you entry moved me to tears. As the mother and mother-in-law of two brave soldiers that have served in Iraq, I applaud your entry. Both my son and daughter-in-law have voiced the same opinion of what will happen if we get a weak president and our troops come home too soon. Well done and well written my friend. BRAVO!
Jan Ackerson 02/25/08
Beautifully written, Sir William--powerful and eloquent.
Karen Wilber 02/25/08
Wow. Took me a minute to figure out what had happened, but that's just because my mind was going one direction when you redirected to the funeral of one who died because of a post-war terrorist attack. Nice twist in terms of plot--pray it never comes true.

Was just on the phone to a niece recently back from military duty in mid east. This one struck home.
Catrina Bradley 02/27/08
Thank you for this brave piece. The son's letter moved me to tears. I feel I'm missing something tho - was this sgt killed as a result of or after pulling the troops out of Iraq? Great writing.
Holly Westefeld02/27/08
nicely done, overall, and a good take on the topic.
At first, I thought it was the pastor's son's funeral, then the change of name and rank made me wonder if it was a double funeral, then with another reading I finally got it.
Verna Cole Mitchell 02/27/08
You have written a powerful piece for us to think about. God help America if a new president does not seek His wisdom.
The analogy with the broom was particularly beautiful.
Sara Harricharan 02/27/08
Thank you for this beautifully written piece from a different POV. It makes it more real to read of it this way. The story came alive for me and I could feel for each character. You did well.
Loren T. Lowery02/27/08
This gave me chills - thank-you for giving a voice to those valliant soldiers who see beyond the temporal world and fight for and believe in a greater war.
Your analogy of sweeping sand from the floor had to have been inspired. Tremedous job!
Debbie Wistrom02/27/08
Great writing here. Thanks for a new perspective.
Joshua Janoski02/28/08
What a superb tribute to the soldiers who fight for our nation. I really appreciated your perspective and your sincerity in this piece. Thank you for sharing.
Lauryn Abbott03/03/08
Thank you for writing this piece - it is beautiful and moved me to tears. I love our country and love those who realize that freedom isn't free. While I cringe each time I hear of another soldiers death, I am so thankful that they were willing to stand and fight for something bigger than themselves.


   
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