The Official Writing Challenge
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02/15/08
A very good telling of a story. It's so hard to find a good ending that will give a badaboom punch to something like this.
02/16/08
Oh, very good. I had tears in my eyes--you did great conveying the disappointment. The 'just don't make me cry' --sooooo realistic.
02/17/08
What a beautiful story, and very realistic. So easy to get a hospital birth record confused with a birth certificate. And the daughter's reaction was very moving.
02/21/08
Congratulations on your EC! What an incredible piece!!!! :)
02/21/08
Congrats on your EC with this heart-warming story! Excellent writing!
02/21/08
Congratulations on your EC. This is a beautiful story. Very nice writing.
02/21/08
Congratulations, James! Your story is simply beautiful. I love the MC and the daughter-what a sweet young woman. (I enjoyed reading your interview, too!)