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Great description of William... in just a few simple words, I could feel the cold of him as well. Also, thanks for the reminder that real prayer does take sweat.
Good storytelling.
William gave me chills! Our God answers prayer.
"The Power of a Praying Wife" comes to mind.
I too could see William and sense his emanating chill.
Good descriptive piece.
Gave me goosebumps here. I'm so glad that her prayers made the difference, I could feel the change in character and mood here. The ending was just right for this piece. Nice job! ^_^