The Official Writing Challenge
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02/10/08
Wow. Powerful and very visual.
02/10/08
Very powerful, very well-done. This would be great, performed by a youth group. Super!
02/10/08
Chilling and thought provoking. Yeah, I think this would be a good youth group skit. Good writing.
02/11/08
I really like making this a script. It's very effective for this message. -I'd love to see it performed.
02/13/08
Chilling is the right word for this! The end where Jackis is saying she can't be dead-wow. that certainly adds a new twist to this piece. I liked how you did the script format and it was surprising to see how everyone's view of Jackie was so very different. Nice job! ^_^
The title is wonderful and the story played out like something from the Twilight Zone. Keep up the good words.
02/13/08
The title really makes this story. Very well crafted and you brought the topic home.