The Official Writing Challenge
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02/02/08
The glasses almost seem to be a red herring. The real "glitter" seemed to be the idea that Shelbyville is a refuge from fear. I wonder if the MC will spend the rest of her life worrying about fitting in.
02/02/08
Just fascinating. I was absolutely engaged. Very, very creative.
This one really makes you think... I'm guessing that Shelbyville is the glitter that more or less stole the MC's soul away...
The writing is excellent. An enjoyable read that stays with you.