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02/01/08
I hope you expand on this - there is obviously much more to this story. I SO want to know more of the details. Great descriptions and tie-in to the topic.
Mysterious and attention getting. Well written, but I, too, want to know more.
02/03/08
I wonder if Cloone will accept her offer, or continue hunting down the rest of the Christians... Good story.
02/05/08
interesting...
02/05/08
Yikes! Good end times story, with a different twist than most. I enjoyed this, and hope you'll expand it.
Good story. I enjoyed the tension and the mystery. I, too, wanted more and to understand the background of the story. Great writing.
02/06/08
Ok, where's the rest of it? I want to know more! LOL Great job with the topic, really enjoyed this. You should expand this to a longer piece.
02/06/08
After so many comments begging for more...

Will there be more?
02/06/08
Wonderful writing! It reads like a chapter of an endtime novel.
Very thought provoking. Just who would I trust, even from my current church, should christianity become illegal in the US in my lifetime? Would I be able to detect the wolves in sheep's clothing?
Great job of drawing your reader into the story. Love the suspense and vivid emotions.
02/06/08
This is intense, the suspense is definitely there. Clonne struck a chord with me, especially when he said that all he had to do was bow his head at the right time. wow. That is powerful. Great job with this! ^_^
How sinister and mean. This had the atmosphere of "The Diary of Anne Frank" but with a modern twist. Great job of story telling and easily we can be deceived.
Enjoyed the drama of this piece, very engaging. I agree that you have much more to say about this, keep it up.