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All that effort to get accepted into the tennis club, and for what? Loved the title.
I felt the story would have been even stronger if you focused more on one scene, such as when she overheard the gossip, and added more dialog and interaction.
Great title. Your descriptions were very good - I felt like I was right there.
Except for a few spelling errors, this was great! I love the title!
The story captivated me. I wanted to know what happened. Good job.
Interesting story. How sad when we want to belong for the wrong reasons.
Very well written and right on the topic. What a bunch of losers that tennis club are!
I love your ending!! :D