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01/31/08
All that effort to get accepted into the tennis club, and for what? Loved the title.
I felt the story would have been even stronger if you focused more on one scene, such as when she overheard the gossip, and added more dialog and interaction.
02/01/08
Great title. Your descriptions were very good - I felt like I was right there.
02/02/08
Except for a few spelling errors, this was great! I love the title!
The story captivated me. I wanted to know what happened. Good job.
02/04/08
Interesting story. How sad when we want to belong for the wrong reasons.
Very well written and right on the topic. What a bunch of losers that tennis club are!
I love your ending!! :D