The Official Writing Challenge
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01/18/08
I love the happy ending. Very realistic scenario here.
01/18/08
Love the part about happiness and contentment not being one and the same. And not being trapped: we often leave ourselves in situations that aren't good for us just because we think we have to once we've made a decision. Good characters in this story.
01/19/08
Loved the realistic characters in the story. Felt like I was there watching it unfold.
From your apt title to the end of the story, you kept my interest--good storytelling.
01/20/08
If only all of us were that penitent when we realize we made the wrong choice. Good lesson for all of us when others are thinking "told you so." Realistic and convicting!
01/20/08
Enjoyed the characters - felt like I really got to know them. Very nice.