The Official Writing Challenge
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12/14/07
Great conclusion and tie in to the Bible verse, reminding us of the Church's purpose here on Earth. To be like Him.
12/14/07
Great job. I like how you gave them names that reflected their personality and gifts rather than "real" names. You portrayed your characters well!
12/15/07
Very nice characterizations - and a wonderful message.
12/19/07
Cool! I've never thought of that verse in this sort of context before. Creative story.
12/19/07
Beautiful, just beautiful!
12/19/07
Oooh, neat title! I like how it ties in with the different names and everything. This was like a first chapter that I wanted to keep reading more of. Good job.