The Official Writing Challenge
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This is the cutest thing I've read in a while... your first encounter with this little one is hilarious. Good story - and a happy ending to boot!
12/07/07
Oh, do I ever LOVE this! Your descriptions are amazingly amazing and your voice is absolutely delightful and captivating. Oh, and of course, there's the message. Wonderful all around.
12/07/07
This was so much fun to read. Joy sounds like she has quite the personality. This is written very well -- the dialogue was perfect. Good job.
12/09/07
I love all of your sensory details and your wit. Great story!
12/10/07
Great title, and I loved the story — very refreshing.
I was captivated by you as a lemon with legs and then by your kidnapper. Delightful story