The Official Writing Challenge
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11/15/07
Great title. A bitter story - two stories in one, I think. Encouragement is using our bitter stories to make the stories of others sweeter. Very good.
11/15/07
This brought tears to my eyes. It's amazing how God uses one person's pain to bring comfort to another.
11/15/07
Masterful presentation, level FIVE writing. Impressive and inspiring. God bless.
11/16/07
So vivid and heartwrenching and painfully descriptive. You tore my heart out. Wow.
11/21/07
This was almost painful to read. You brought the emotions to life, as if I could see their faces and feel their grief. Very touching.