The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a lovely story of redemption. I would have liked to have been shown a little bit more than narrated to, but it's still a good read. The ending was strong. Nice job.
11/03/07
This is a great story. The one thing I would have liked to have seen is more dialogue.
Great story! I would love hearing it through the voices of the characters. Nevertheless, what a neat legacy for Frank.
What a very sweet story with a super message. I would have liked to be shown more of the action, rather than been told, but this is very nice. Good job.

Also, it bothered me a little that the pastor let the young man teach a class when he knew so little about him. Perhaps he could have been a helper to start.

I loved how "Gregory" named his child Frank after the teacher. Very sweet.