The Official Writing Challenge
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I'm ashamed to say that this reader at least, can share your thoughts. It's so easy to come to worship with a cold heart and a bad attitude. Yes, "open our eyes, Lord, we DO want to see Jesus." Well done.
Incredibly powerful and convicting - I think we have ALL been there, to an extent, sometimes. Love the form of this.
Very creative. POint well made! Great reader involvment and presentation. God bless.
Really well crafted--I usually don't care for the kind of epilogue you've put here, but you did it exactly right--this is a really strong piece.
So many stepping on toes this week:) This is a very good piece.
You've given me much to think about. Well done.
The sad truth of your story is also lightened a bit by your humor. And because we are human, we will each have one of these days somewhere on the journey. I enjoyed your style.
Yes, that was me 12 years ago. (You forgot the crossword puzzle I did during the sermon -- made it look like I was taking notes). Good job on the internal dialog.