The Official Writing Challenge
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This little girl's heart in the story is so beautiful, ash she gives the message clearly.
08/03/07
So very sweet and endearing. I love the little girl and her bunny. Her dialog in a couple places seemed a touch "old" for her - but losing a father at a young age can certainly make a child grow up early and quickly! Wonderful and tender.
08/04/07
A sad story with a light of hope at the end. The child's gift is a warm addition to your touching story.
08/04/07
I loved this sweet but sad story. Once again alcohol abuse destroys and yet the love of a child God can use to start the healing process. Great writing.. touching, tender, and wrenching...