The Official Writing Challenge
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04/26/07
Nicely set up for the play on words at the end. Just the right touch of romance and fun. Good work.
04/30/07
Fun and delightful! Great story!
04/30/07
I laughed out loud at the last third of this delightful story. This is utterly charming.
This was a hoot! Very well done.
04/30/07
I just LOVED this. The play and the romance are blended just perfectly. Did I say I loved this?
04/30/07
Um ... I'm not sure I would waste precious moments of that 30 minutes! :) Boy did YOU nail this one! ;)

Truly fun.
05/01/07
A great balance between fun and FUN... I loved it. Cheri
05/02/07
You go girl! You proved Christian married women are smart (we get a clean house to boot) and rock. I LOVED this.
05/02/07
Very lively story. This was a great little, playful story. Good Job!
05/02/07
Ha! Very good. Great voice and tempo written by a seasoned anointed pro. God bless.
Now I know why my wife finds me so romantic. Congratulations on your EC placement!
05/03/07
Congratulations on your first place! Like I said, I loved this one, it just shines.
What a fun, truly romantic story! It was a pleasure to judge this week, and to assist in finding this gem!
05/03/07
CONGRATULATIONS on your FIRST PLACE EC WIN!!!!!!!! I'm so happy for you! :)
05/03/07
Congratulations on your EC win! Blessings, Cheri
05/10/07
WOW!! That was good, you held my attention and made me smile. Congrats.
Great, romantic story...I would have sent your daughter to the Wal-mart in the next town...as for the crumbs...get a dog...great writing...worthy of the prize...