The Official Writing Challenge
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03/16/07
A very sad story. I liked the way that the theme of music kept cropping up throughout the piece -particularly through the references to rhythm in the rain.
03/16/07
Beautiful. The redemption in this is profound. Wonderfully done.
03/19/07
Heartbreaking and well-written story with a powerful ending.
Very sad. Will we humans never learn that our actions hurt others? But love will out. I'm glad to see the father show that tenderness that he had been withholding from his son.