The Official Writing Challenge
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This story certainly set a homey, comfortable mood. I've seen saw paintings before, and they are wonderful. Well done.
02/15/07
I liked the moment in which the MC realizes what a gift it is to have a heritage and a connection to family. I liked how this story started in one place and led to another.
This was beautifully and cleverly done. I kept waiting to see where crafts would fit into the story but it finally did. I loved it!
02/17/07
You created a nice moment. Very nicely done. Enjoyed this. God bless.
A vivid mountain view you painted for us here! I love your last line. Nice job.
02/18/07
Lovely slice of life.
Good job. I was taken in by the words: "headed into a tiny little town that really didn’t care what the rest of the world did". It put me right into the setting.
02/21/07
Good job with the "you are there" aspect of this piece!