The Official Writing Challenge
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02/02/07
So intense. Your description is so vivid - and I really had no idea where he was until the four men showed up. You did an awesome job of building the suspense here, and I love the verse you ended with.
I loved the suspense and the sense of surety his smile evoked before his eyes were forever dimmed.
Good job. Well done.
02/05/07
I enjoyed this piece. I love the man's faith believing God would give the perfect verse in such a simple way, and He did. Great work.
02/05/07
Great story! It kept my attention and was descriptive. It moved me to feel compassion for the man. It was both sad and joyful how the man was sentenced to die but found new life in the very last minute. Great message - It's never too late (in this world, on this side of death) to accept Jesus' awesome gift of salvation and mercy!
02/06/07
I loved this one, and you were enjoyably creative with your storyline.