The Official Writing Challenge
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01/18/07
What a delightfl explanation of how our Bible came into existence. Over 40 writers writing over 1400 years. But in John 1:1 the Son tells us about the Father. Great!
01/18/07
Hey, this is wonderful. I never expected the ending. Completeness only through the Son. Very creative.
01/20/07
clever!
01/20/07
LOVED this - I guessed what you were doing fairly early, but still loved every bit of it. Awesome!
Good story, I like the parallels to God and his Son. I was wondering, though--the story itself doesn't have perfect punctuation, as the title might suggest. Was that on purpose?
01/23/07
Good story! I wondered too about the punctuation - not capitalizing Dad or Sir - done on purpose?
01/23/07
An interesting way to put God and His son in everyday language. If you'd capitalized "Sir" and "Son" you would have lost your surprise ending!
05/09/07
Apologies for contacting you this way but we need your bio note please for the Faithwriters book "Hidden in the Hymns". Can you please contact me?
Riveting! Loved every bite!