The Official Writing Challenge
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Outstanding! what else could be said?
11/16/06
I loved this parable and the last verse was brilliant.
11/16/06
Please post more of your poems at Poetry and Poets of God: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/poetryandpoetsofgod/
11/19/06
A magnificent parable indeed - well done.
Awesome! Chills ran down my spine reading the last line. I was wondering if the swimmer would realize there is only one true 'Master of the Sea.'
11/20/06
I agree--the last line is the one that gave me shivers. Dust off the mantel.
I enjoyed reading this so much. I also wondered when your MC would realize who was truly Master of the Sea and gave a big grin at the last line. :^)
11/22/06
Who's this author? The Master of FW Poetry. Very strong. Excellent work.
Well-done.
Great work, as always, Kenn! Love it!