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10/12/06
What a good parable. You've addressed the different senses well - the light, smell, gritty taste etc - you put your reader right in the scene.
This is an excellent way to illustrate the truth of Jesus being the only way. Thanks for your creativity in dealing with a topic that is common among many in the world today.
Wow! What an amazing story! I love the parallel you did between Jesus and the firefighter. Even the girl's response that it is "intolerant" to say there is only one way. You have talent. I loved it!!!
10/15/06
Excellent - a modern parable, gritty and hard-hitting, without any element of preaching or interpretation. It spoke very powerfully for itself. I hope this will see print in one form or another.
This brings out the foolishness of those who do not follow the one and only true Way. Great job! Good point.
10/18/06
This is wonderfully amazing and amazingly wonderful!! Awesome in every way. So effective on every level!!