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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 4 – Masters)
Topic: Fire-fighter (10/05/06)

TITLE: Fire Starter, Fire Quencher
By Sandra Petersen
10/10/06


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The crescent moon rides on gathering storm clouds. Stars glitter and are extinguished one by one. I am clothed by the gloom of the night as I enter the white frame building. The morning sun will seek out a landscape of great destruction. I laugh in delight at the promise of a darkened dawn.

I was selected for this project because I am the best. Among my fellows, I am admired, envied . . . yes, even hated. I brandish the tools of my trade with great skill. I know no fear.

Our leader has called for a sudden massive assault, and we, his hirelings, will obey. I have been hand-picked for my assignment. I must succeed. Our agenda must not fail.

I select from my collection of incendiary devices. Our time to destroy this city has been shortened. The unrest foretold by the enemy’s prophets has begun. I must use the unrest to our advantage.

Elsewhere in the city my fellow workers are planting seeds. The harvest will be bitter indeed. The inhabitants will never know what caused their city to perish. Their terrorized screams will froth at their lips. The symphony of despair will be sweet music.

I envision the results of our labors and smirk.

By the table on the platform I pour out the fire starter until the carpet is saturated. The emblem of the enemy decorates one side of the steps. I avoid it and descend. Scattering old rags and crumpled papers throughout the room, I again ascend the steps. But for the spark that will send this building up in flames, my job is nearly finished.

Lights flicker on in the foyer and I halt my movements. I squint anxiously toward the front doors.

A stooped woman hobbles up the aisle toward the platform. Her thick-lensed glasses make her pale eyes huge and milky. Snowy hair frames a face creased with wrinkles. Many of those wrinkles formed as a result of my activities in the lives of her family. My leader had warned me to expect her arrival and anticipate resistance. Why should I fear this one? I chuckle at her frailty.

She halts mid-aisle and frowns up at me.

I know that I, as well as the evidence of my work, am invisible to mortal eyes, but I tremble. This old crone, who should not have been aware of my presence, somehow senses me.

“I know you are here,” she states. I recede into the shadows on the platform and narrow my eyes. She seems so weak and again I wonder at our leader’s admonition for caution. I can not be vanquished by any mortal weapon. Remembering this, I mock her boldness.

“You foul spirit! In the name and authority of my Lord and Savior Jesus Christ, I command you to leave this sanctuary!” She thumps her cane on the floor, punctuating each word. She calls on the despised name several times.

Too late I realize what her weapon is and know I have to obey. Though her words torment me with searing pain, I set the match to the soaked carpet.

Now she is on her knees before the altar, beseeching the Almighty enemy to purge the building.

“Unforgiveness must leave,” she prays, and it evaporates like water from the carpet beneath me. She names each of my tools . . . disunity, deceit, gossip, hatred . . . I watch in despair as the rags and papers I have scattered vaporize. My labor is being destroyed by the prayers of a feeble-kneed old woman and I am almost powerless to stop her.

I must try. I cast the twin spirits of doubt and fear at her. They melt. Screaming, I hurl myself toward her but am stopped as if by an invisible shield.

I hiss in defeat. She bears the seal of the enemy. Not a hair of her hoary head may be touched.

“Leave now,” she breathes, and I escape into the dawn. There is no more to be done.

Throughout the city, my coworkers join me in flight as she and more like her claim their city for their God and King. We have lost this battle but there is still time before the end, and more souls to be destroyed elsewhere. We will continue to fight.

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Luke 10:19 (MKJV) Behold, I give to you authority to tread on serpents and scorpions, and over all the authority of the enemy. And nothing shall by any means hurt you.


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Suzanne R10/12/06
You really bring this verse to life, showing us how to apply it. Your opening paragraph was gripping - sucked me right deep into the story.
Rebecca Livermore10/12/06
This is an excellent reminder of the spiritual battle we are all engaged in and the powerful weapon of prayer. May your writing encourage many to use that weapon fervently so that God's name will be glorified! Thanks for sharing!
Kevin Kindrick10/12/06
Ooh-Rah! I love these stories, though have never seen one quite like this from satan's perspective. Well done, and thanks.

God bless,

Kevin
Pat Guy 10/12/06
Wow! This is awesome! This is powerful! This is inspirational! Well done!
Venice Kichura10/15/06
Very powerful message on spiritual warfare---great job!
Jan Ackerson 10/16/06
Awesome!
Donna Emery10/16/06
Wow! You definitely depicted the spiritual warfare and you did it very well. Kudos!
Joanne Sher 10/17/06
Excellent vivid description of the unseen world - so real, I could see it happening! Very interesting perspective!
Sara Harricharan 10/18/06
WOW! I love how your wrote from the 'villain's' point of view. Excellent, awesome writing! I really enjoyed the end, and the 'spiritual battle' between the two. Keep up the great work!
Cassie Memmer10/18/06
I loved this story! Victory over evil--Yeah! I'm glad your character was a feeble old woman, it proves, "though we are weak He is strong!" Great writing!
Laurie Glass10/19/06
Wow, no wonder you won with this one. This is so gripping. Excellent.
Bonnie Derksen10/20/06
Congratulations, Sandra, on your well-deserved EC win.
I loved this. The "feeble-kneed old woman" is a beautiful picture of God's power in humble, trusting prayer.
Thanks for a great reminder and blessings on your pen.
Bonnie


   
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