The Official Writing Challenge
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09/07/06
I needed this today. Thank you and well done.
Boy, this hits the nail on the head:
"while on the banks of “If Only”
I feel like I’m walking uphill.”

I liked your transition to "surrender" with the middle portion that's a dialog from God.



Your rhyme, meter, and message are all on target! Great job.
09/14/06
Oh, this is WONDERFUL! Perfect rhyme and meter, and so elegantly told. Congrats, congrats, congrats!!!
09/14/06
I love this, Bonnie. "If only..." versus "Surrender" ... YES! Excellent writing in every way - the content, the way it is expressed, the music of the poetry - excellent!
Just an amazing poem!!! I love it! xox
11/13/06
Come and post your poetry at Poetry and Poets of God: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/poetryandpoetsofgod/
11/13/06
Please come and post your poetry at Poetry and Poets of God: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/poetryandpoetsofgod/