The Official Writing Challenge
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Comforting. I like the concept of a "song of comfort..." which is what the Word offers us.
09/01/06
This is wonderful! I really like the prologue, and the alternating scripture and narrative in the body of your story. I think any parent of a troubled child would find great comfort in this piece. Just lovely.
This is beautifu! I feel your pain and have been where you are. May God continue to minister to you as you await the return (I pray soon return) of your beloved son! (((hugs!))))
09/07/06
What a beautiful description of the 'big picture'. Magnificent. Like somebody else said, what a comfort for anyone in the main character's position. Just beautiful.
09/08/06
A comforting and true perspective. My two sons have followed Trouble and, according to His promise, Trouble has been turned away from them! A very encouraging piece of writing.