The Official Writing Challenge
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08/18/06
Wow, beautifully painted and atomospheric. I loved the ending. I loved it all, in fact.
08/18/06
This gave me goosebumps. What a WONDERFUL story, masterfully told. Loved the end - and it took me a bit by surprise, though I should have expected, I suppose, considering the forum. The scenes here were amazingly realistic.
08/18/06
Great job! Very creative.
Congrats on your win!! :-)
08/24/06
Thomas, super job here! Excellent story, great talent. Congratulations on your win. God Bless.
This was such an enjoyable read, Thomas. Enlightening and rich with Indian culture. Congratulations on a job well done. May God continue to bless your writing as you honor him with your stories.