The Official Writing Challenge
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Children are indeed a blessing - and a litle child shall lead them. A very 'hospitable' and delightful story.
02/17/05
What a delightful story. Your little "babbling brook" is a Godsend. God lets our children bring joy into our lives.
I could just picture your little chatterbox as your imaging was great here. You had the feeling that the mom knew she was going to learn more from her child that "teach" some days!
02/21/05
I really liked the way you were making her sandwich throughout, it made the whole conversation more real somehow.