The Official Writing Challenge
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Cute commentary on past and present confrontations with trees! Even artificial ones.... :-)
12/15/05
Witty and fun to read!
12/17/05
Oh, this was a lighthearted trip filled with laughter! I really enjoyed the read and the ride! Sorry 'bout the lack of concern from both horse and human; but you've suvived and lived to tell your horror story of Tree Confrontations! Very well written, and a welcome delight for this Reader! Kudos!
12/18/05
I have to admit, the only horse I ever rode accepted quarters instead of hay, so I started to abort the read early on. Your storytelling kept me attached to the piece from start to finish.
Good stuff.
I could picture your second paragraph as well as your second incident with Flicker very well! (Horses don't like me!)
Oh, was this clever writing!! The responses of both your son and your mother were classic humor! LOL many times!
Flawless delivery! I could see this in a women's magazine!
12/19/05
Very droll. Particularly loved your last line! Yeggy