The Official Writing Challenge
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Interesting how she tells a lie to protect God's people, and how that scarlet thread never runs out from the spool of God's history: even for the hidden Jews in Germany.
I enjoyed this strong and sturdy poem of God's unusual ways. Amen.
This is a jewel of well thought out poetry!
03/25/10
Too choppy for my taste, the rhymes felt very forced. Keep writing.
03/26/10
Congrats Carol! on your Highly Commended and Placing. I so loved your poem on Rahab...I felt your heart.
Carol! How cool that you made the "fab five" too! I'm glad I got to comment on a sturdy worthy poem, first in line.
04/13/10
Congrats Carol! I especially loved your summary of God's miracles for the Israelites and emphasis on us fallen, ordinary sinners, being used in extraordinary ways through God's Grace. Well done!