The Official Writing Challenge
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10/29/09
Lovely picture of the renewal we can find in Christ. I especially like the verse,"When refreshing is my need and my mind will pay no heed, Help me learn to let you lead; and make me lie down."
Very nice and very organized entry!!!

May God bless!

Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship

10/30/09
Excellent. I loved the message and flow of this verse. So often we resist the very thing we need. Good job and thank you for the reminder.
Your use of rhyme was extremely effective in this piece. Having the first three lines rhyme had the effect of dropping your burdens and resting in the Lord once you get to the fourth line in the stanza. Great writing!