The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a lovely story with a poignant message. Praise God for his grace to us, especially in the low places of our faith journey!
08/19/05
A wonderful reminder that He sees things a little differently than we do. Being a dreamer, I liked the detailed images of yours! Good Work!!
08/19/05
Very powerful entry, beautifully written. How we see things is definitely a far cry from His point of view. Excellent job!
Blessings, Lynda
08/19/05
I particularly liked that you let the reader in straight away to the fact that this was a dream. Very clear descriptions of the places. So wonderful that Jesus doesn't keep a record of our wrongs and longs to have the 'wanderer' back. Yeggy
This has a deep and reflective quality. A good idea - to go sightseeing through our past and let the Lord show us the Reality of our walk with Him. :-)
08/19/05
I LOVED Jesus' comment about the third stop, and his urging to "come back." Perfect.
08/20/05
Beautiful
08/21/05
very very touching. Powerful thoughts.
08/22/05
Beautifully written piece with an even more beautiful message.