The Official Writing Challenge
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12/07/08
Thanks for this glimpse into Meeta's house. Her family, their names, and their traditions are fascinating. Very nice work on this.
12/09/08
Very good look into one family's tradition. I enjoyed this very much.
The fact that this is a real family tradition is wonderful. Thank you for a glimps into how your family celebrates. :)
There was much at the beginning that was never explained - like mom had to what? for example. Once the activity of the day started, tho, I got caught up in the excitement and love that filled the day. I only wish I knew more, but then you always have an air of mystery to your stories. You have a lot of talent!
Loved this look into another family's traditions. I, too, would have liked to know the "what" with the mom. Doesn't negate the fact that this is very well written, though. Kudos.