The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, how sweet! I felt so sad at the end, but then glad that she had the chance to go back to the alter, with Long John and ask Christ into her heart. Such a tender story! ^_^
Loved Long John and the matter of fact way you described him. Loved the part about him carrying the NT in place of cigarettes. Great job!
A beautiful story of God's transforming power, for both of you.